the rocky point dissolvesdiluted is the linethat once markedthe noise of the morningbetween radio and stormP(63)
I should have been there with youexposed and exposingor at least makingnoise—jokes—somethinginstead of mumblingthis solidarity—With Blue—uncertain stumbling BuzzBetween the light—and me.P(41)
the reason I enjoyed this poem, was because I felt like I understood the meaning behind it, and what was trying to be said. It seems like this person is talking about someone that they had one last chance with, or possibly they were dying and they regret that they couldn’t reach out to them, and didn’t tell them how they really felt about them, instead they stayed to themselves in solidarity as the poem states. I felt like it had a sad tone which I also enjoyed because it felt real, and is probably going to be a feeling that everyone is going to understand at one point in their life. Although rhyming poems makes more sense to me I still ponder on the harder poems, and appreciate their deeper poems like this one.